Insanity

Insanity

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Felt like losing it in this poem. Makes me feel free.

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In sanity or... 
Insanity? 
Like something chilling up my spine, 
all the thoughts that aren't mine.
Some reptilian thing crawling inside my brain, 
a heavy heart, burdened by pain. 
And worms inside my head, 
making me feel bad, 
making me feel sad, 
making me go mad. 
Fears conjured by my feverish mind, 
terror, horrors and monsters align. 
Harpies and Hydras emerge, 
as this old heart bursts with anxiety, 
so many fears, such a long variety. 
As all nightmares begin to converge. 
Ghosts that haunt my imagination, 
bad Angels seeking Revelation, 
spectres of desolation. 
Powers, let me be... 
So I can be at peace and free, 
from this moment on, let me be. 
I exorcize you by ink, 
you no longer bother how I think, 
By my pen these inner demons die, 
and truth shines brighter than any lie. 
I shall not fall insane! I cry...
Though despair at times may seem great,
such shall not become my ill fate.
I may be broken, some crazy words spoken... 
But for a life worse than death? 
I am not beaten yet! 
Illusions or delusions, 
I shall not fall for that, 
This life is mine and I take it back! 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
I felt like writing about insanity.
And how people may struggle to keep a rational mind at times.
Don't worry, I don't think I am really insane...
Just writing this made me feel free.
I like to go all the way with my poetry.
I hope you all can enjoy my work.
All visits and reviews are welcome and appreciated.
Thank you so much for your visit.
Take good care. Bright blessings.

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This poem reflects on the nature of fear, the haunting presence of negative thoughts, and the power of writing as a therapeutic outlet.

The language is vivid and evocative, employing strong imagery to convey the turmoil within the poet's mind.

Your poem emphasizes the importance of creative expression as a tool for healing and self-assertion, advocating for the right to reclaim one’s life from the depths of mental anguish.

Interesting write, quite deep yet a reality for many. Being sane when it feels like everything makes no sense.
Thanks for sharing such a raw poem..
-Amy


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Yes, that was my intention.
Rational versus irrational.
Thank you so much for your vis.. read more
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome.
Keep good!
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

😃 You too Amy.



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I think i lost my sanity when I was born

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Week Ago

Yeah, that happens to some of us.
Thank you so much for your visit and your review.
Ta.. read more
I feel the word insanity is used for many things, but you've captured all of it in this poem.

The will to want to fight something that you've created yourself is hard, and when its you vs you, that makes the fight harder, that is what insanity is, I feel that every one of your lines completely understood that.
My favorite overall has to be "I shall not fall insane! I cry..."the speak is refusing something which is eating them from the inside, and it is beautiful.
Living in a world full of crazies who call themselves sane must be what it feels like to be insane, and I love how you've put that into words in your poem.

- Maya.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your visit and your review.
Your words are deeply appreciated Maya.
read more
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Week Ago

Sometimes it is difficult just to be normal.
Take good care friend.
Bright blessings.
maya_online

1 Week Ago

And to you, love your writing !
I think at times we all feel some kind of insanity....or deep depression....and anxiety...you show us what it's like to actually be insane, with delusional behavior....and feeling trapped, like there is nothing to do about it....your descriptions are alive, so the reader gets the point....well done!
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your visit and your review, Betty. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
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I liked it 👍 no cap like simple direction you get what you get when you read it NFA needed

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Jon.
Your visit and your review are very welcome.
I am so glad you e.. read more
Wow! A very empowering poem, dear A. R... So many people struggle day in and day out with psychiatric problems, but you have found a wonderful answer to banishing them from your life. The pen is mightier than the sword when it comes to slaying these insane thoughts. Getting them out of one's head and down on paper is the answer. There, they may be analysed and dissected and finally dealt with. All poets have a deep sensitive spirit which makes them more prone to their feelings and those of others. Eliminating negative thoughts, words, etc from our lives is a great help too! I love how the poet claims his life as HIS and uses his power through his writing to take his life back from the dark side and live fully in the positive, good and light side. An excellently penned and expressed poem which so many will be able to identify with and realise that they are not alone in their pain. Dear A. R... Your poem will give them the courage to change their thoughts into poetic diamonds which glisten and shine brighter than the brightest star and which will help them take back their own power and lead them out of the dark and into the beautiful brightness of the present moment.


writing is wonderful therapy. Thank you so very much for sharing, dear A. R... Your words will bring comfort and to so many who read this sublime and very evocative write...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Wow, thank you so much for that outstanding review Marie. If my poetry does help just one person alr.. read more
Marie

1 Month Ago

Most welcome always, dear friend. Brightest Blessings your way too ☺️
This poem reflects on the nature of fear, the haunting presence of negative thoughts, and the power of writing as a therapeutic outlet.

The language is vivid and evocative, employing strong imagery to convey the turmoil within the poet's mind.

Your poem emphasizes the importance of creative expression as a tool for healing and self-assertion, advocating for the right to reclaim one’s life from the depths of mental anguish.

Interesting write, quite deep yet a reality for many. Being sane when it feels like everything makes no sense.
Thanks for sharing such a raw poem..
-Amy


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Yes, that was my intention.
Rational versus irrational.
Thank you so much for your vis.. read more
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome.
Keep good!
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

😃 You too Amy.

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Added on October 2, 2024
Last Updated on October 2, 2024
Tags: Insanity, crazy, rational, rationality, demons, monsters

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The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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