Hidden hopes

Hidden hopes

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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A poem about hope.

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We all have some hidden hope, 
or secret desire. 
May help us cope, 
or burn like fire. 

I had hope for a better future. 
Hope in a brighter tomorrow. 
Where I would be mature, 
with less pain and sorrow. 

Hope in a new day, 
bringing love and peace. 
Hope in not being cast away, 
even hope in plain justice. 

Hope in a simple kiss. 
Hope in a gentle caress. 
That my hope would not dismiss, 
or be some sin I need to confess. 

And I take this final note, 
we should all be free, 
and never lose hope, 
on you or on me. 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
A poem about hope. Amy R. picked the title. Thank you for your visit and your review if you leave any. Take good care.

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Nicely done,

It reflects the universal human experience of yearning for a brighter tomorrow and the significance of holding onto hope.. Hope the only thing that keeps us MOVING FORWARD.

-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you Amy. It was your title that inspired me.
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
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Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome, my friend. 😊
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

😃 🌹 💗 Thank you again...
Faith and love may go their ways, but when hope is gone, the game is up.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

True John. Hope was the last thing to remain in Pandora's box. Without hope everything fails.
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One of the few absolute essentials that we need to hold on to with both hands. especially like the import closing do not give up on yourself or others. Nice read -carl

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you Carl. I agree we should never lose hope.
So glad you enjoyed this poem.
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Added on July 29, 2024
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Tags: Hope, love, poetry, sad, hidden

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The_Ancient_Rock
The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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