Sad and alone.

Sad and alone.

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Blue poem.

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Sometimes I feel so bad. 
Sometimes I feel so sad. 
By the loss of what I once had, 
regret drives me mad. 

It is not what I have done, 
it is all I did not do. 
I was never the one,
she always made me feel blue. 

At first it was easy, 
but then it got heavy. 
These broken hearts, 
broken into small tiny parts. 

Can amends ever be made, 
or shall the bonds fade? 
Time can be merciless, 
relentless, cruel, ruthless. 

My love from the past, 
that did not last. 
Aside I was cast, 
way too fast. 

I have made myself invisible, 
present only in memory, ethereal. 
If such a thing can be conceivable, 
fantasy is better than the real deal. 

Bad luck, 
too many years. 
I gave up, 
to all my fears. 

Now it is only my dried tears, 
all the smoke, and all the beers. 
All these years facing my peers. 

I will not go, 
I rather stay. 
Don't need you to say, 
I got absolutely no dough. 

I am sorry. 
I will not go...
I will live in a memory, 
lost in my poetry. 

Sad and alone... 
Past hope is gone. 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Another poem about loss
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Take good care.

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Such a deep yet sad poem, I felt so many emotions here that you portrayed.
The way you penned this so raw and filled of emotions.
Nicely done, loss eh, something very hard to deal with and then sometimes the past tend to hurt us when reminded of it.
Keep well my friend.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Amy.
You got it all right. The past can hurt.
Thank you so much fo.. read more
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're welcome,
I am happy to hear this.😊😊



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Such a deep yet sad poem, I felt so many emotions here that you portrayed.
The way you penned this so raw and filled of emotions.
Nicely done, loss eh, something very hard to deal with and then sometimes the past tend to hurt us when reminded of it.
Keep well my friend.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Amy.
You got it all right. The past can hurt.
Thank you so much fo.. read more
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're welcome,
I am happy to hear this.😊😊

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Added on July 16, 2024
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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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