Autumn leaves

Autumn leaves

A Story by The_Ancient_Rock
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About the natural cycle of nature and life.

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I see all these dried autumn leaves swept by the whirlwind, each year more reaching winter.
I myself am a leaf hanging on a branch, starting to look yellow on the edges. 
Soon I will dry up and get swept by the wind like all the other autumn leaves.
Young sprouts grow in the tree of life, yet so green and vibrant of youth, like eternal spring is upon them. I too remember being a young sprout and watch all the fallen autumn leaves dance in the wind. 
The seasons follow and another cycle is complete. 
The new must replace the old. Winter comes for us all. 
Let us always remember spring and summer. 
And when we were no more than a young sprout on the majestic tree of life. Yet so green and youthful. 
Still... I've always found autumn leaves to be the most beautiful. 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


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The_Ancient_Rock
A short story about the natural cycle of life.

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mou
Autumn is my favorite season as it shows the reality, makes us poised. You've painted the reality eloquently. I read your poems and they're so good. For the first time, I'm feeling the soothing vibe of your story. I want to read more now. Have a beautiful day
- mou

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The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Wow, that is awesome.
Thank you so much for your visit and kind words dear mou.
Vivald.. read more
mou

7 Months Ago

You're very welcome, my dear friend. Have a beautiful day



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mou
Autumn is my favorite season as it shows the reality, makes us poised. You've painted the reality eloquently. I read your poems and they're so good. For the first time, I'm feeling the soothing vibe of your story. I want to read more now. Have a beautiful day
- mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Wow, that is awesome.
Thank you so much for your visit and kind words dear mou.
Vivald.. read more
mou

7 Months Ago

You're very welcome, my dear friend. Have a beautiful day
I love the days of Autumn. Halloween and the change of color. Amazing dance of words and thoughts my friend. I did enjoy the poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for Autumn.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


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The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your visit and great review,
Yes, Autumn is a beautiful season.
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Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome my friend.
I love how the poet compares and contrasts the season of Autumn with the season of Autumn in the circle of life in this sublime write. Like the poem, both in the season of Autumn and the circle of life, the autumn years are also my favourite and I would not return to the Spring or Summer if I was given a wish which would be granted. Lovely visual detail in the picture painted. I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you Marie, that is an awesome review.
So glad you enjoyed this piece.
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Marie

7 Months Ago

Most welcome, A.R. I so enjoyed your poem and again, thank you for sharing. Take care of you too, st.. read more
The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Most grateful for your kind words.
😃
I usually like autumn leaves because they look like shattered dreams broken on the pavement. Also, I get to step on them!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Yeah, for real lol...
We do step on them all the time.
Thank you for the great review... read more
A very powerful story. I loved this.
Very true about life being a cycle and the way you used autumn leaves as comparison.
Very well done!!
-Amy

Posted 7 Months Ago


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The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Tomorrow I will start a new work.
Take good care Amy!
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Amy R

7 Months Ago

Alright .that's great to hear!! U to. Take care.
The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thx Amy.
I will try.
Take good care.
😃🌹
In the autumn of life you can assess what was right or wrong about the past. And since you still have a fair amount of time left, you are less likely to make the same mistakes.

Posted 7 Months Ago


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The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Indeed, there is still time.
And we have all the experience of the years.
And our mist.. read more

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Added on May 12, 2024
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Tags: Nature, old age, autumn

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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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