The maiden and the sailor.

The maiden and the sailor.

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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A poem by Amy R.

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In a moment where time stood still, 
they kissed, a love so pure, so real. 
Years of longing, aching hearts, 
promises made, never to part.

He sailed away to a distant war, 
leaving her alone on the shore. 
Lockets exchanged, paintings inside, 
memories of love, forever to abide. 

One last caress, a tearful goodbye, 
as he turned and left, under the sky. 
Her heart weighed heavy, burdened with fear,
the sea, a cruel, unforgiving frontier. 

Salted tears of widows past, 
mixed with the ocean vast. 
Seven years she waited, faithful and true, 
praying each day for his safe return, anew.

Seasons changed, time marched on, 
hope flickered, but was never gone. 
On a sunny summer day, a sailed appeared,
her love returning, her heart revered. 

Running into each other's arms,
kisses shared, erasing harms. 
Tears of joy, love shining bright, 
vowing never to part, in each other's sight.

As they gazed into each other's eyes,
a spark ignited between them. 
Their connection deepening, 
with every heartbeat, every breath. 

Under the blanket of the bright sky, 
their love blossomed. 
A love so pure, 
destined to withstand any test of time. 

From that blessed day, they swore, 
to stay together forevermore. 
Through trials and storms, hand in hand, 
their love enduring, like grains of sand. 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Full credit of this poem goes to Amy R.
Most of the poem was based on a short story I wrote.
Thank you all, hope you can enjoy it.
Thank you Amy.

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A beautiful narrative poem which I so enjoyed reading. So happy that the lovers were reunited and stood together through the storms of life, deeply in love. I was sad when the sailor seemed lost at sea and overjoyed when unexpectedly one day he returned to his beloved, never to leave her side again, together through think and thin. Thank you for sharing, A.R. Have a very lovely evening and enjoy...

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your great review.
Your words are deeply appreciated.
I wish you.. read more
Marie

6 Months Ago

Most welcome, dear A.R.
Brightest blessings your way, dear poetess...
The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

I am sure Amy will appreciate those blessings...
Thank you so much for visiting.
Bless.. read more



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A hopeful and beautiful poem with a hopeful ending my friend.
"Under the blanket of the bright sky,
their love blossomed.
A love so pure,
destined to withstand any test of time."
I liked the above lines. A lullaby with a happy ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your review and kind words friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.<.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
A beautiful narrative poem which I so enjoyed reading. So happy that the lovers were reunited and stood together through the storms of life, deeply in love. I was sad when the sailor seemed lost at sea and overjoyed when unexpectedly one day he returned to his beloved, never to leave her side again, together through think and thin. Thank you for sharing, A.R. Have a very lovely evening and enjoy...

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your great review.
Your words are deeply appreciated.
I wish you.. read more
Marie

6 Months Ago

Most welcome, dear A.R.
Brightest blessings your way, dear poetess...
The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

I am sure Amy will appreciate those blessings...
Thank you so much for visiting.
Bless.. read more
This is so very beautiful, I enjoyed this.
Amazing flow of words.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you Meg.
I so much appreciate your visit and kind review.
So glad you enjoyed th.. read more
It's beautiful. Well done, Amy. And well done Rose for sharing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

So glad you enjoyed this poem.
Thank you.
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mou
Nothing can be more beautiful than a love returns to its 'promise'. I enjoyed the beautiful story and the soothing words. Great write!
- mou

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much mou.
I am glad for your words and that you enjoyed this poem.
Take g.. read more
A delightful and intelligent take on the age old but beautiful problems.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Ken.
I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
Take good care.
😃
This was a very inspirational story,
So I felt like it deserved being a poem,
What a beautiful love story, shows even in time, once love it true,
it'll return home!
-Amy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

And you felt very well...
It is an awesome work in my opinion.
Well done Amy.
T.. read more
Amy R

6 Months Ago

Ahaha, well u already have the masterpiece here,
so yep! 😊

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Added on May 7, 2024
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