The poet and the poetess.

The poet and the poetess.

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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A sad love story. By Amy R. and The_Ancient_Rock.

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The poet was silent before,
nevermore. 
Why did you had to leave? 
Baby girl, I had so much love left to give. 
I need you near. 
I want you here. 
To uncover you with gentleness. 
To discover you in kindness. 
Love is the poem. 
I am the poet, you are the poetess. 
You complete me. 
When I am blind, you make me see. 
Hold me in your love, guide me... 
Gentle flower, seduce me... 
Reduce me to the simplicity of love. 
Lift my heart up above.
_______________

The poetess softly replied, 
"I had to leave, I had to be free." 
From your love so strong, it felt like chains guarding me, from the life I couldn't see, 
our love was strong, our hearts were too bright, 
but the world outside was not in our sight, 
we dreamt of a big life, 
of adventures and more, 
but our world didn't allow,
 it was not what we had explore. 
So I had to leave, 
to find my own way, 
to follow my heart, 
to chase my own day. 

What we had was beautiful... 
You are free to keep all our memories, 
but I am not for you anymore, 
I want you to be happy, 
that we once happened. 
That the universe got to experience a love once so beautiful. 
Hold the love I shared with you in your heart,
and with that lift your head high, my dear. 
______________

The poet: The_Ancient_Rock 
The poetess: Amy R. 

03/05/2024

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
By The_Ancient_Rock and Amy R.
Another collaboration poem.
A poem about the loss of a loved one, in two different views, people that go separate ways even though they love each other.
I hope everyone can enjoy.
Thank you for the visit and review if you leave any.

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Hard to adore a poet. I tried. Hard for two poets to maintain a same table.
"What we had was beautiful...
You are free to keep all our memories,
but I am not for you anymore,
I want you to be happy,
that we once happened"
I understand the above lines. Us, who love to write. We need a beautiful painter. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
Thank you for your visit.. read more



Reviews

Hard to adore a poet. I tried. Hard for two poets to maintain a same table.
"What we had was beautiful...
You are free to keep all our memories,
but I am not for you anymore,
I want you to be happy,
that we once happened"
I understand the above lines. Us, who love to write. We need a beautiful painter. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
Thank you for your visit.. read more
Great work and a nice collaboration ♥️.

But you know... love can never chain someone, love means freedom.
Leaving with the memories of togetherness is like cherry on top.

Soft, sweet words. ♥️

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Soyam...
For the awesome review and kind words.
Yes, love should mea.. read more
Soyam

6 Months Ago

:)

You are welcome
The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

🌹 Thanks again. 💘😃
A very well written piece again, with you poet friend,
Thanks for sharing your perspectives through poetry with me,
Twas a gr8 write...
-Amy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you Amy.
It was a real pleasure working with you on this one.
Take good care.read more
Amy R

6 Months Ago

Aww, you're very welcome.
I just read this on Amy's page. Your words gel well together.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
So glad you enjoyed it.
😄
Papaya

6 Months Ago

You're welcome 🙂

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Added on May 3, 2024
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