A recipe for depression

A recipe for depression

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Ingredients.

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Three small spoons of crushed dreams.
A pint of tears. 
A handful of bitterness. 
A pinch of sorrow. 

Stir it all in the slow fire of regret, let it all cool down in grudge.

To the table little ones, depression is served. 

Heartbreak is for dessert. 

And sadness our cow can be milked over and over again. 

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock


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The_Ancient_Rock
A recipe.

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Oof. That packs a punch. Sadly, I may have a variation of this recipe. 🌷

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

Yes, I guess there are many variations.
So glad you took the time to read my work.
Tha.. read more
this is so real... I say that a lot but this is the recipe for my deppression right there!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

6 Months Ago

The best real cure for it is just try and have fun I guess... Thank you for taking time to read and .. read more
A beautifully written recipe for depression. I often too feel depression I can definitely relate. A good recipe

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
I am so glad you enjoyed my work.
It is a difficult.. read more
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mou
There are people who think depression is just a blue mood but it is real and horrible. You've painted it with a fresh, innovative style. Indeed, this dish is hard to swallow. A truly intelligent write!
- mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review.
I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Yo.. read more
mou

7 Months Ago

Oh you're more than welcome
you sure mixed and stirred this one. that's one recipe i know all too well but could do without. and be sure to have a bucket handy for when you have to puke it all up because most of us have trouble keeping it down. cleverly baked.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you for the great review Pete.
I am so glad when people enjoy my work.
True, har.. read more
I do enjoy these recipe type poems. I see them pop up occasionally in various places. I think they are telling of so much of what a writer is going though at any given time.

Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

I am glad you enjoyed my work.
Thank you so much for your review.
You are most welcome.. read more
Oh damn,
Never thought to see a description of this so very well done.
Hoping you are good!
-Amy

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy R

7 Months Ago

Heyy, you're welcome!

Ohh exploring different paths in poetry, nicely done!
Al.. read more
The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Nice. You are welcome.
Thanks again.
Take good care.
Amy R

7 Months Ago

u too! No problem
That sounds like a hex is about to be served. Depression can be created due to the thing you describe above, trauma and a multitude of other things.

This was an interesting way to describe it. Well done on this piece

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Take good care.

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Added on April 21, 2024
Last Updated on April 21, 2024
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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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