The fall

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock

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I fall in love too fast and too deep.

My feet walk a path too narrow and too steep.

For all the times I meet or tried to fit.

All that I gave, that I could not keep.

Love, forget me, I am gone...

I am only flesh and bone.

All the choirs sing a song,

about a king now overthrown.

Love is the most gentle grace.

I saw love on your face.

My heart runs at a pace,

set for doom and disgrace.

Love it is not fair.

Love it is a war.

And I could never bare,

all the things done before.

Ah, it is my birthday today...

And I'll say all I can say,

monday to sunday.

All the time, all the day.

Actually it's wednesday...

And we are still away...

© 2024 The_Ancient_Rock

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Davidgeo

It's very important to meet the person before the lover. Not all love is worth falling for a bad person over. There are more good people worth falling in love over than we think at first. Too many of us get duped into the "only one for me" fallacy. Good people are worth loving, bad love is worth running away from. Either way, it's best not to fall too soon. I'm bad at relationships so my take here might be a little dysfunctional. I like how your writing induces thought. It's helpful to the reader on a personal level.