Young love

I can shout my love for you into the sky. 

The sky is blue... 

So am I and so are you. 

For now, guess it is goobye... 

Your family were firestarters when they were young... 

Now they play firemen, so long... 

I could write another sad song;

But there is no use hun. 

Impossible for years... 

I am possible but there are fears... 

Possible, may bring tears. 

It wasn't my plan to fall in love...

I can't move, below or above.

May you be a bee... 

Or may you be a bird. 

My love, see... 

Bad weather, dire tempests in the, sea. 

Wish it could be, just you and me. 

Be safe... 

Be well... 

Be happy... 

Be female... 

Be sassy. 

I am an old fool... 

Can burn, hard to play cool. 

Not bound, by some new rule. 

Love does not always have to be sexual... 

Sometimes it can be, just special. 

Love can be, even in an animal... 

Some people look happy... 

Not me, should I throw a, festival? 

I care... 

I dare... 

This life is unfair. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes sometimes life is unfair, especially when something doesn't click with you, like a love tryst gone crazy... it's unfortunate but sometimes you don't get what you want....life really isn't unfair, it's the person who thinks that way....it can be rectified...
Thank you for sharing...
Warmly, B.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yeah I guess so B.
Thank you for reading my work.
Wish you all the best.
Blessed be!

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome! And a joyous new year to you and yours.!
Warmly
B.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you.
Wishes of a happy new year as well.
🌹

[living lavender]

the emotion behind this piece can not be limited to one.
this was a great battle of feelings. all relatable.
{beautiful piece. brilliant. enchanting to say the least.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you...
I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Happy new year.
Hugs. Blessed be!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

We must try my friend.
"Be well...
Be happy...
Be female...
Be sassy.
I am an old fool.."
We must find something good to do. Everyday of our life. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you my friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed my work.
Blessed be!
👍

[nadia dmitri]

Wow the diction you use is amazing. "Your family were firestarters...now they play firemen" is such an awesome metaphor, it is my favourite part. Amazing work :)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you so much...
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Blessed be!

[Soyam]

Such a beautiful one.

You really describe your love beautifully, although it is not possible to.

Keep going. Nice one.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you...
Love is indeed a powerful force.
I am so glad you enjoyed this one.
Blessed be!