Eternal

Eternal

A Story by The_Ancient_Rock
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Forever and ever...

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I wish to be like a diamond. 
Nearly perfect, almost flawless. 
Close to unbreakable, and forever shining... 
Eternal, ageless, never dying, timeless. 
I wish to be eternal... 
To see the countless ages. 
To endure century after century. 
To live forever and ever... 
To be forever young and forever old. 
Never to die. 
Even if the world dies around you... 
I feel like the most selfish person. 
Why can't we all be eternal?
Nothing is ever perfect... 
But that sounds almost like perfection. 
Or at least, close to it.
Eternal...
This life seems far too short. 
And nothing ever lasts forever. 


I do not seek redemption... 

© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Timeless.

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Featured Review

Oh wow,
I definitely thought of immortality, how beautiful will it be,
I love how u expressed everything so nicely.
You wrote in such a conversational tone, leaving the readers to reflect on the complexities of human existence.
Greatly written!
-Amy

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Wow, thank you so much Amy.
Yes, immortality, maybe some day in the future such a thing will .. read more
Amy R

7 Months Ago

You're welcome,
twas a nice read.



Reviews

Oh wow,
I definitely thought of immortality, how beautiful will it be,
I love how u expressed everything so nicely.
You wrote in such a conversational tone, leaving the readers to reflect on the complexities of human existence.
Greatly written!
-Amy

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Wow, thank you so much Amy.
Yes, immortality, maybe some day in the future such a thing will .. read more
Amy R

7 Months Ago

You're welcome,
twas a nice read.

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Added on August 1, 2023
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The_Ancient_Rock
The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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