For Dawn

For Dawn

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Happy Birthday Dawn...

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Hey Dawn... taking this time to write you something...

Happy Birthday girl!

Was to say something yesterday but was really drunk… sorry.

This isn’t really a birth-day present, just a few lost words.

We do live in very different worlds…

You’re like a little princess…

I’m an ugly old dog…

Maybe I’ve found true love at last…

I hope you’ll be happy for me.

I saw you crying on that video clip…

I felt so bad for you girl…

I hope I was of real help.

 

It could never work out between us…

You’re a celebrity…

I’m stuck in my reality…

Maybe it’s better I love you…

Like a father, a brother or a friend.

 

You said you would love me forever…

Thank you for that!

I’ll always love you forever as well…

You will always have a special place in my heart…

But we know we can’t be together.

 

It’s time to be a bit more down to earth…

Even in impossible loves…

Some are more possible than others.

 

I hope you are well…

Hope you live a great life…

I’ll be following you… sometimes.

 

It’s true we might wanna save the world,

But I’m just a boy… and you’re just a girl…

 

Don’t know if you’ll get this…

But one can always hope.

 

Take good care Dawn…


Blessed be!!!



© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
A short letter for Dawn.

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a letter of truth and honesty; splitting up is difficult for the soul...but that doesn't mean we can't be friends..and be in touch once i a while; some relationships are not meant to be, but being supportive of one another is is very kind.
Good thoughts
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Betty, for all your kind words...

Yes, sometimes we gotta be honest...
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Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome!
Best, B



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Very clever and creative. I have written letters to the moon but never the dawn. I might need to try this one day. : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes friend... it's for a real girl...

She just calls herself Dawn in another language.. read more
There is a touching honesty about this piece. When the penny drops and reality stares you in the face. Nice sentiment here, a friendly way to call it a day.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much... I try to be honest with myself about everything I write... Sometimes I can go a.. read more
a letter of truth and honesty; splitting up is difficult for the soul...but that doesn't mean we can't be friends..and be in touch once i a while; some relationships are not meant to be, but being supportive of one another is is very kind.
Good thoughts
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Betty, for all your kind words...

Yes, sometimes we gotta be honest...
read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome!
Best, B

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Added on June 16, 2023
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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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