My baby's not around...

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

Where did she went?

Where can she be found?

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

And the weather just,

keeps on bringing me down.

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

Everything is quiet,

can’t hear a sound.

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

And upon my face…

I now carry a frown.

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

She lives many, many miles away…

But to her I feel… Forever bound.

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…  

 If only I could touch her…

Or make love to her on top of a mound.

 

My baby’s not around,

my baby’s not around…

And sometimes I may feel…

Just like a sad clown.

 

                       My baby’s not around…                       

My baby’s not around…

My baby’s not around…

Author's Note

... not around.

Reviews

[Soyam]

Let's together begin a journey to find your baby.
Let me take some big nets ;) Let's catch her with that. ;)

Hope you'll find her soon.

May be she's busy somewhere. Why you think yourself as a clown? If she's not there that her problem. Don't blame yourself.

Good one!!! ●_●

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yes... honey... I will need you help.

Like I said in Poetry... we can focus on many emotions or even try a more rational style... for those who like that.

Thing is mostly I focus on things, like loneliness, sadness even depression.

It's my way to take up all the negative and try and do somethng positive and constructive, with all that.

I felt inspired so I felt the need to write this one.

Other things sometimes... even though it's true... I say some things to give more "flare to the poem"

For example to rhyme with around...
Some words... like clown or mound... and so on.

It wasn't her problem... we have duties, responsabilities, beliefs...

She was only away, because she had to be... and I understand and respect that completely.

The poem... This poem... I felt inspired and the words just pop up in my head... and I really felt like doing it.

But yes! To have her back in my life... feels my Heart with the purest Joy.

It was only a day... but sometimes... our feelings get the best of us... and seconds may turn minutes, minutes may turn hours, and hours, may feel like days...

Time is relative to our mind.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem and most of my works.

We both must thank that inspiring muse... a whole lot.

Let's both treat her... how she deserves... and she deserver everything!

Awesome review.

Thank you so much!

Blessed be!!!

;)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Sorry... not feels... but fills my heart.

;)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Sorry for other errors as well... it's my Keyboard... old... keys get stuck sometimes...

read moreSorry for other errors as well... it's my Keyboard... old... keys get stuck sometimes...

not she deserver... but, she deserves everything!

;)

[Alla Antsis]

It is sad but absolutely terrific for a song! With sound notes, this can very well be a hit! Love it!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you so much!

It's true I enjoy writing lyrics sometimes...

But honestly I wasn't thinking about that when I wrote this one.

But yes... guess it could make a nice song.

Thank you for the awesome review.

;)

[Dara]

Ah it sounds like the lyrics to a sad song. Long distance relationships can be heart wrenching. The sad thing about it is often our feelings get stronger when they are not around.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I completely agree with you Dara...

Can be very difficult indeed...

And with the latest things I found out about...

Damn... it really is dire straights...

Way more for her than for me...

Never saw myself as privileged in any way...

But comparing to others... damn!!!

I got it bad... but some others... have it even worse...

It's complicated... indeed.

Thank you!!!

[NelliKong]

Wow just wow. Your baby will return to you. Great piece. You're not a clown though

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you Nelly... Thank you so much for your kind words...

Yeah... the clown thing... you know it's a bit like Em said...

All entertainers have a bit of clown and are clowns in a way...

So yeah... sometimes... I feel a bit of a clown...

Not in the real sense of the word though...

Yes... I hope she will stay with me...

I pray almost every night... so that... mote it be.

I was missing you Nelli... where have you been?

Looking forward to read your new works.

Blessed be!!!

;)

[NelliKong]

Thank you I will be posting more pieces soon

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Awesome... I can see you have a lot of new work already...

You're so many... hard to keep track on everybody... But, I'll try...

And so many awesome, true poets...

You really make me feel at home.

;)

Like I said... night is ending for me... bed soon.

But I still have a little time...

And I'll keep on tomorrow.

Blessed be!!!

;)

[Chris Shaw]

Could be lyrics for a song. A sad song at that. Special people can make such a difference. Hope your baby joins you soon.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yes... it could be lyrics for a song...

I do rap music sometimes... but I'm afraid this one is too much of a short poem to become one of those... but who knows? Maybe I will do so...

Yes... many times I write about sad things, troubling things... it's true.

I try and get inspiration from whatever emotion, I can.

Well... I hope she's able to join me soon, as well.

Great review Chris... I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...

Blessed be!

;)