The right mind

The right mind

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Yeah... that's how it goes...

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There is something wrong,

with people that are not in their right mind…

They are just, not in the right mind…

Many things can cause such a thing…

 

The loss of family.

The loss of a loved one.

The loss of faith.

The loss of love…

 

Some people…

Just not in their right mind…

Of course one may question,

what is the right mind?

 

Steady job?

Happy family?

Mcdonald’s lunch or dinner?

 

Exactly… what is the right mind?

And of course… there may be trauma.

Compulsive obsessive disorder…

PTSD…

 

So… right mind?

How can one be… in his right mind?

What is the right mind?

What about… the left mind?

 

Ahah… Yeah man…

 

The right mind.




  

© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Right mind...

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Interesting take on PTSD
The play on words is fascinating...
Right mind oh no left mind...ha ha..
But PTSD can never be taken lightly... Right...
There is a traumatic situation that moved that person from their right mind... right???
and so perhaps their left mind needs to take over... but not so... Hopefully, the person with PTSD finds that RIGHT person to help and get them back to their RIGHT self...
I did like the poem as it made me think...
Right mind or left mind....
Lisa, in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa...

Yes... I enjoy making sort of word games sometimes... just like tha.. read more



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Interesting take on PTSD
The play on words is fascinating...
Right mind oh no left mind...ha ha..
But PTSD can never be taken lightly... Right...
There is a traumatic situation that moved that person from their right mind... right???
and so perhaps their left mind needs to take over... but not so... Hopefully, the person with PTSD finds that RIGHT person to help and get them back to their RIGHT self...
I did like the poem as it made me think...
Right mind or left mind....
Lisa, in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa...

Yes... I enjoy making sort of word games sometimes... just like tha.. read more

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Added on May 31, 2023
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The_Ancient_Rock
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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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