Friend or foe?

Friend or foe?

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Yup...

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So... I was walking in this dark dungeon...

And I came up to this dark cell…

And inside was this beautiful angel…


Friend or foe?


She asked over and over for my woe…


Friend or foe?


Friend or foe?


Friend or foe?

 

I tried to reassure her… for no use…

No matter my good intentions she couldn’t excuse…

The monsters got this one good…

 

Friend or foe?



© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Hmm...

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Ahh, decisions decisions... right..
However, as we get older it is much easier to discern if one is a friend or foe. The thought goes on and I think... well, perhaps at first it appears to be a friend but later all signs lead to a foe. The angel, that sits on your shoulder will guide you to the right path. Listening closely you will know.
Lisa, still in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa.

For your awesome review.

;)
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome



Reviews

So who's that!!!

Are you okii *_*

She might be your "frioe" : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

I don't know anything anymore Soyam...

Everything seemed to be going well and now...<.. read more
Soyam

1 Year Ago

Negativity is there to improve the value of positivity.

Same foes are there to incre.. read more
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Soyam!

Thank you so much!

;)
She blocked me...

Like I was nothing, nobody...

Maybe I couldn't live up to her expectations... I'm not mr. Perfect.

We try to help someone... what's even the point.

It's always the same s**t!

So fed up with it all... damn!!!

:(



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soyam

1 Year Ago

Nobody is perfect enough!

Imperfections in human is like a rule of nature.
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The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Indeed.

By some glitch that sometimes happens to me on this site, can't read your ful.. read more
when one comes upon this question, it can increase fear, because of the unknown; but hopefully this angel will be a friend for life...let's look at the positive side.....also sometimes it's hard to tell....more anxiety..
Nice work, I liked it!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes B... I completely agree with what you wrote.

Thank you so much for your review.read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!
Best, B
Ahh, decisions decisions... right..
However, as we get older it is much easier to discern if one is a friend or foe. The thought goes on and I think... well, perhaps at first it appears to be a friend but later all signs lead to a foe. The angel, that sits on your shoulder will guide you to the right path. Listening closely you will know.
Lisa, still in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lisa.

For your awesome review.

;)
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome
Surely an Angel will know who is a friend or who is foe. Angel’s are beautiful, they need friends. What’s it to be? Don’t let this have an unhappy ending:)

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you... I'm trying but... It's really not easy...

Damaged people trying to help... read more
Hard to decide friend and foe? The beautiful Angel must decide. A interesting ending my friend.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend.

Yes... we all must make our decisions...

;)

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Added on May 18, 2023
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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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