In...

In...

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Yeah...

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In... sane...

To be in... sane...

And not to be...

In sects...

Or...

In cest...

Or...

Whatever...

In... sane!!!

INSANE!!! LOST IT!!! CUCKOOS!!! IDIOTS!!!

WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE?

IN... HUMANE...

INHUMAN...

LEAVE THE CHILDREN ALONE!!!

© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


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The_Ancient_Rock
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Interesting plays on words in this one. It starts out almost hesitantly, noting words with the prefix "in," with "insane" predominating. Then suddenly, all words are upper case, as if to emphasize urgency. The last line is a demand to leave the children alone. It sounds as though something very wrong is taking place.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes... unfortunately seems some things might have gone a bit wrong...

One tries to fi.. read more



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Interesting plays on words in this one. It starts out almost hesitantly, noting words with the prefix "in," with "insane" predominating. Then suddenly, all words are upper case, as if to emphasize urgency. The last line is a demand to leave the children alone. It sounds as though something very wrong is taking place.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes... unfortunately seems some things might have gone a bit wrong...

One tries to fi.. read more
I agree. Too much indoctrination going on. Leave our kids alone. ( Remember Pink Floyd) That’s where you took me.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes Chris... damn it...

Ok... I'm not perfect... never really was...

N.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

That!s a whole lot of words. Hope you are feeling the better for them. I listened.
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yeah... feeling better... no! Not really...

Don't know if such will be possible ever .. read more
Jesus!!!

People young enough to be my real sons or daughters...

Sad... to reach my age to behold all this...

Don't know what to do... don't know...

Anything that can really be done?

How the hell are we gonna just fix all this crap?

Sure would love to know...

Please... do tell!!!

What is the solution?

The final solution?

Damn...

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on May 7, 2023
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Tags: crazy, insane, deranged, hostile, maniacs, predators, insects

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The_Ancient_Rock
The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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