Hellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think you are writing between the lines,
I like it because it is blasphemous,
It drew me back. I hope you continue to write of such,
because we must not desbelief, or hate, but kinda search
notwhitstanding, it is the Bible, but also a great enamourment, please do tell
----Maynard
Even if it's blasphemy to the Church... and Church leaders...
Is it not the most absolute truth... or at least... how things really should be?
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
;)
1 Year Ago
I did, The_Ancient_Rock,
I'm joking.
It isn't blasphemous,
I like the sense of .. read moreI did, The_Ancient_Rock,
I'm joking.
It isn't blasphemous,
I like the sense of it,
I love your quarrel within thy heart,
I love your apprehendoe
----Maynard 😂
1 Year Ago
Glad you love it...
As Kurt said...
I'm only here... for your amusemen.. read moreGlad you love it...
As Kurt said...
I'm only here... for your amusement... ;)
1 Year Ago
Okay, Kurt, my habit to be prendencie
and please forgive my improvencio if I do,
I am.. read moreOkay, Kurt, my habit to be prendencie
and please forgive my improvencio if I do,
I am a brute, don't know better
1 Year Ago
I think you might know better and you do it on purpose...
But maybe it's just me.
1 Year Ago
Hellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think part of my review was cut,
LOL or I forgot to type .. read moreHellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think part of my review was cut,
LOL or I forgot to type my mind,
very ah absentminded. No honey, I'm of flesh and blood, I don't mean to hurt, love to read yrr, and
love to approach your poetas and love them
True words are spoken here. An old friend, long since departed this mortal coil, had a saying. He was a Scotsman, " Nay forget, we're all Jock Thompson's bairns". Thank you for this poem.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
No man... thank you for your review...
Some people around here are trully awesome.read moreNo man... thank you for your review...
Personally, I'm not a Christian believer (I'm still trying to determine what religion I believe in), but this is a well-structured poem, nonetheless.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Correction: In my belief, A god only exists if you believe it exists. But I don't wanna get too phil.. read moreCorrection: In my belief, A god only exists if you believe it exists. But I don't wanna get too philosophical, or I'd be here all night typing this.
Hellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think you are writing between the lines,
I like it because it is blasphemous,
It drew me back. I hope you continue to write of such,
because we must not desbelief, or hate, but kinda search
notwhitstanding, it is the Bible, but also a great enamourment, please do tell
----Maynard
Even if it's blasphemy to the Church... and Church leaders...
Is it not the most absolute truth... or at least... how things really should be?
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
;)
1 Year Ago
I did, The_Ancient_Rock,
I'm joking.
It isn't blasphemous,
I like the sense of .. read moreI did, The_Ancient_Rock,
I'm joking.
It isn't blasphemous,
I like the sense of it,
I love your quarrel within thy heart,
I love your apprehendoe
----Maynard 😂
1 Year Ago
Glad you love it...
As Kurt said...
I'm only here... for your amusemen.. read moreGlad you love it...
As Kurt said...
I'm only here... for your amusement... ;)
1 Year Ago
Okay, Kurt, my habit to be prendencie
and please forgive my improvencio if I do,
I am.. read moreOkay, Kurt, my habit to be prendencie
and please forgive my improvencio if I do,
I am a brute, don't know better
1 Year Ago
I think you might know better and you do it on purpose...
But maybe it's just me.
1 Year Ago
Hellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think part of my review was cut,
LOL or I forgot to type .. read moreHellos, The_Ancient_Rock,
I think part of my review was cut,
LOL or I forgot to type my mind,
very ah absentminded. No honey, I'm of flesh and blood, I don't mean to hurt, love to read yrr, and
love to approach your poetas and love them