No Good Day Starts Like ThisA Story by PeteEric is a layabout. His morning is catastrophic.NO GOOD DAY
EVER STARTED LIKE THIS.
Waking up to
thunderous banging is never good. The sound of a thousand angry fists tore his
sleep to shreds and revealed Eric to the woken world; a startled and barely
conscious caricature of himself, one without the motor functions and cognitive
ability of every human 30 minutes ahead in their morning routine, and one
without the wherewithal to stop himself from rolling straight off his bed’s
edge, landing on the remnants of some god awful takeaway Eric didn’t remember
ordering but evidently had. It looked like chicken but the smell was that of
some unknowable beast, at least 30 years dead and 3/4s rotten (pre
deep-frying).
Eric had
deduced this not only from the smell, which was now infiltrating his entire
body so he smelled it when inhaling then tasted it exhaling, but also because
his lower intestine was attempting to writhe its way to freedom, via the
abdomen or spine, whichever broke first.
With so many
conflicting priorities bouncing around his morning-soft brain he was inevitably
about to prioritise wrongly. Staggering, stumbling, tripping then tumbling down
the stairs, he endured his second fall of the morning, the impact of which,
combined with his lively bowel led to a prompt and explosive s**t-in-pants
situation. Eric staggered himself by his initial thought, which was “Explosion
beats implosion.”
By this
point however, the visitors who had woken him in the first place could see him,
in fact, they probably saw him fall down the stairs, which were positioned
directly in front of the glass panelled door.
Either way,
he decided it would look weird if he now just disappeared into another room, so
instead, did the respectable thing and answered the door. He stood
there for a second before speaking; almost intentionally giving his unwanted
companions a chance to fully take in the spectacle.
His straggly
brown hair had not been washed since he’d heard that it can wash itself during
a conversation about how expensive shampoo was, he had bits of unknowable
beast, and similarly mysterious neon red sauce on his left side, including a
chunk which had lodged itself between his collar and neck, s**t in his pants
and a carpet burn which covered precisely half his face.
Looking back
at him, with undisguised disgust and indignation were two burly men wearing
blue jeans, bomber jackets and woolly hats. “Mr Entoniffel?” said the leader
(you could tell because he held the clipboard). “Morning.”
Came the mumbled, barely audible response as the smell of feculent hit all
three simultaneously. Eric wretched. The men remained stoic. “We’re here
to ask if we can count on your support in the upcoming election, we represent
the Britain For British Party and basically just want to hit brown people all
day.” “Erm...Probably
not mate.” Eric said, adding “ is that really your policy?” “Have you
s**t yourself?” “Yes.” “Yes it is.
What’s in your hair?” “I think
it’s chicken” another meatier wretch produced a dribble of sick, also neon red,
which plopped onto the front of t-shirt like bird s**t, “I don’t know why it’s
red. Do you really think it’s okay to just hit brown people? Is that even
classed as politics?” “Yeah it’s
fine.” The chubby accomplice piped up. “What’s happened to you?” He turned to
his keeper with the clipboard: “I don’t think this fella’s interested mate, and
if he is, I’m not sure we can be associated with folk like this.” “You’re
right. F**k you Eric.” Asserted the keeper, and the pair left, the signature
swinging arms of the elbowless racist out in force.
Eric shut
the door wandering how they knew his name. He rubbed his eyes, immediately
irritating his carpet burn enough to cause his face to weep blood from its
tissue thin membrane. He’d have to hoover the rest of his skin from the foot of
the stairs. He hated housework. Today was not going well. It was at
this point he realised there were already people in his house. Chattering in
familiar tones bounced from the kitchen tiles, eventually making a sudden and
focussed entry into his now woken state. It was his parents. He could tell by
the sound of squeezed breath escaping twist windpipes in impossible yoga
positions. He could also smell sandalwood and hear the thick gloop of homemade
smoothies.
“Well done
son. Shame about shitting yourself. Stay positive and the universe will provide
you with a stronger bowel. That’s how it works.”
Eric’s Dad
was in the conservatory, his feet were face up to the ceiling and his face was
pointed directly at the floor, his arms in a bridge across his chest to support
his ludicrously flexible hip joints. Years of military experience had
simultaneously produced a refined killing machine and persuaded said machine
that violence was pointless. He now lived on a commune, having gone AWOL and
was technically still on the run.
“We need to
check you’re not getting involved in hate crime.” He said, apropos of nothing
Eric could figure.
“Can I just
go clean up?” he pleaded. “It’s all
natural son, sit in it for a bit. Absorb your own nature.” He seemed confident
that this was science, Eric couldn’t be bothered to dispute it. Despite the
sandals, Alladin trousers and general aura of free love which he seemed to
carry " Eric knew his Dad would likely flip out and have to go live in the
woods to recover again if they argued. “We just tested you. And while you
passed, we are a bit disappointed that you believed they were racists, just
because they’re white and wearing bomber jackets. Very presumptuous Eric.”
“What?” Eric
really wanted this to end.
“Those men,
they’re from the commune. Sent them over to check your not going all racist and
stuff.” “Why would I
‘go all racist’?” Eric employed the bunny ears to indicate his disinterest and
contempt for his Dad’s random inquisition.
“Dunno, it
happens, especially when people find themselves in threatening or confusing
situations.”
Eric slung
his head backwards in despair and left to clean up. On his way to the upstairs
bathroom he noticed a small string had been pulled across the staircase.
Further on he saw the carpet outside his room (which faced the stairs) had been
lifted from the grips and was curled up. “No f*****g
way!” Now
completely preoccupied with detective work, the s**t still sloshing into liquid
in his boxers, he walked into his room,
where he saw the container of weird meat, the receipt next to it showed today’s
date, 9am, and it was untouched, save for the trial leading from the polystyrene
box to the pillow. Now
convinced he’d been tricked into the morning’s horror, he shot downstairs "
still failing to recognize the importance of shitless pants " to confront his
Dad.
When he
entered the conservatory though, the only thing there to receive his hastily
scripted bollocking were two red hand prints and a note which read:
“I genuinely
didn’t count on you shitting yourself son, eat more nuts, they’re a great
source of protein and totes natural! Love Dad”
© 2014 PeteAuthor's Note
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Added on July 3, 2014 Last Updated on July 3, 2014 AuthorPeteLeeds, West Yorkshire, United KingdomAboutI'm a journalism graduate/teapot salesman, based in Leeds UK. I write short stories... I also get flustered and brief when confronted with 'About Me' sections. more..Writing
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