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A place we call home

A place to rome free

And do what we wont

With in reason

We talk how we wont

We dress how we wont

We act how we wont

As long as we abide by the rules

We are free to do what we please

We are a loud to talk about the government

As we please

Freedom of speech

Freedom to bare arms

As long as we don’t kill anyone

Freedom to be who we are

Freedom to be what we wont to be

 

Now how many country’s can u do that in?

 

So if you don’t like this country

Then leave

Don’t try to blow it up, or hurt us

Cause as we say

“Pay backs a b***h”

So you don’t like it here

Then move to f*****g

Britain

 

11-13-08

Reviews

[Guardian]

Very interesting. It's strong and powerful. I like seeing your personally being the driving force of the poem. Good job. ^_^

[Hope]

Very strong, patriotic, and has very interesting last stanza ( :D )

[Lexy]

"Move to f*****g Britain" That's funny.