Look Into The Darkness

 

I look in to the darkness

Wondering what is out there

If any things out there

If any ones out there

Will there be another gunfight

What will the potrole to marro be like?

The darkness never seems to end

It goes on and on

[crack]

[crunch]

I pick up my m-16

Speak into my radio

Saying I have movement by the wire

[pop pop] (gun fire)

As we hit the deck

The lights come on

And we return fire

 

I guess I got my answer

It’s going to be one long nite

Only one question left

Will I be going home alive?

Or in a box?

 

11-4-08

Reviews

[distefano 401]

i really liked how you wrote this. i didn't know what this was about at first, until i read further. it was very creative the way you set it up, starting with a thought and then narrating in present tense(and posing a thought again in the end). nice write!