Unfair

 

Its weird

I didn’t understand it at the time

Was just a kid

But in away it took part of me away

Made me who I am to day

I try not to think about it,

sometimes I for get

for years at a time.

It made me cold,

hard

It took part of me

a part I’ll never get back

I was a kid

Too young to understand

So young…

I don’t talk about it

It hurts to much

I remember it

But I don’t see it through my eyes

It’s as if I’m watching a movie

But I know it happened

in real life.

I ask myself, y?

And I’m still wait

for that answer.

 

9-22-08

Reviews

[Lexy]

Have you ever read Chris Crutcher?

[nightmask]

I like how you didn't explain what she didn't understand so the reader's mind can wander over the possibilities