darkness

darkness

A Poem by Aileen

 

As I look around me
All I see is blackness
I can not see the bottom
Or a top
I can not see anything
All I see is my hands and feet
Nothing but blackness surrounds me
I try to move
But I do not know if I am moving anywere
For there is nothing
I am floating in an endless blackness
I am not the only one.
 
9-18-09

© 2008 Aileen


Author's Note

Aileen
if u dont understand this. welcome to the club. it came to me 2day while watching tv.

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cool it makes it sound like your trapped in your bed like a scared seven year old and like the darkness is a weight keeping you from getting up

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Aileen
Aileen

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