Can't sleep

Can't sleep

A Poem by Aileen

 

I cant sleep at nite
Cause all I dream about is you
Only to wake up with out you
I just wont to see your face again
I wont to hear your voice again
You don’t know it
But I’m fallen in love with you
Every time I see you my hart skips a beat
I find my self think about you
At any given time
Wondering if your thinking of me
But only coming to the conclusion
Of most likely not
 
I cant sleep at nite
Cause all I dream about is you
Cause I’m fallen in love with you
 

8/22/08

© 2008 Aileen


Author's Note

Aileen
its not true for me but it is for many ppl. ok maybe a little true for me lol

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This is so true for me...the guy i like has maybe known i exist for the past five years and yet i have barely spoken a word to him....this is my situation...the other situation was that i liked this guy at my school, but he had passed away this past year...so my situation was really....awkward if you could imagine

Posted 16 Years Ago


Guess what. I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight. I'm going to be thinking that another person had said those things. And with my demented mind, it's possible. Anyway, I wanted to know if the "I'm fallen in love" was different from purposefully from "I've fallen in love." I'd never think of saying it that way. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Aileen
Aileen

Long Island, NY



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