Betrayal

Betrayal

A Poem by Aileen

 

Its weird
You stick up for her
All the time
Best friend
At times you’re her only friend
You let her cry on your shoulder
You tell her your secrets
She tells you hers
Your best friends
Hell your sisters
Inseparable
Never far apart
You have the same enemies
Cause you’re always sticking up for her
But then everything changes
She won’t talk to anymore
You find out that
someone told her that you were talking crap bout her
and making faces behind her back
That’s when you find out that the person that told her
is a common enemy
And yet she believes them over you
Her best friend
Her sister
And yet she doesn’t believes you
Why?
You’ll probly never find out
She tells you to stay away
Never talk to her
Never txt her again
And now you see her ever Tuesday and Thursday
For something that you both joined together.
How ironic.
Isn’t?
 
 

By Aileen 7/19/08

© 2008 Aileen


Author's Note

Aileen
it happens to all of us. i now its happend to me. hope u liked it

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I was friends with this girl who I felt was a sister to me we was friends for 15 years we confined in one another about everything did things all the time,then when my mom passed away not even 3 weeks later she asked if I could take her to Texas for me it was 24 hours away driving but she had no other way so I did.I was still in mouring losing my mom I took her and then some things went wrong and her other friend ball faced lied to her saying something I would of never in my life would of said.Of course she believed them over me and I reliezed something to her It wasn't a true sister that I thought she was she used me for the ride. it hurt horribly but ya know thing happen for reasons i was told and to this day I know us not talking any more was for the best. thank you for sharing this with me.It took me a long time to get close to anyone again but now by talking or seeing someone if there true . karen

Posted 16 Years Ago


I do not understand how some people can convict a person that they call "their friend" without a trial. How could they be so certain that gossip is actually truth, when the person that they are talking about protected their back for so long. Do she really need approval from the gossipers so badly that she will buy any garbage that they sell her? People make choices all throughout their lives . . . sometimes they are bad choices . . . and sometimes very costly. So costly that they lose what could have been the best friend of their life. Someone who would do something like that needs to grow up and learn what life is really about.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well, it makes me feel crappy about myself, I'll tell you that.
When you typed "Hell your sisters" it should've (technically) been "Hell, you're sisters"
Really good job on this!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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