All I Nead Is Me

All I Nead Is Me

A Story by Aileen

why dont they understand

they all think i nead someone

but i dont

all i nead is me

i dont think i could ever have someone

im so use to keaping everything to myself

why cant they understand that?

i keap my emotions in check

my fealings in check

if i start to open up...

i just can't

they wont understand

who would?

they all think im unhappy

but im not

am i?

no i'm not!

i'v bin this way for years

i dont nead anyone

why do they think i do?

 

Aileen Maltese 7/07/08

© 2008 Aileen


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Also, as a side note, I think you shouldn't have used "check" twice so closely together. Instead of using that, how about "I keep my in line."

Posted 15 Years Ago


Let me just say that "fealing," "nead," and "keaping" are spelled "feeling," "need," and "keeping."
Very good job on this.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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