I Have To Remember

I Have To Remember

A Story by Aileen

i have to remember

its the only way

its the only way i can help them

what happend?

i have to remember

 

she was just like me

we were best friends

she knew all my problems

all my secrets

she understood me

why'd they kill her?

a senseless murder

she was my sister

why they do it?

i have to remember

she was the best person of the face of the earth

it was senseless

she never told me that ppl were following her

after her for what?

why?

i knew something was up

i thought that dark green toyota was following us

but why?

why'd they kill her?

they just drove by and shot her

a perfect shot

they had to be pros

 

it had happend so fast

what happend?

i have to remember

there, there were, oh no!

think, i have to remember

what did they look like

i can't remember there faces

i have to

but one thing i now is they were pros.

 

Aileen Mnaltese 6/16/07

© 2008 Aileen


Author's Note

Aileen
srry bout the bad spelling

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This reminded me of a book I was reading..
Great choice of words, great emotion, overall..well..just great! haha

Keep up the good work!

Lauren

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very good job on this. You reach the reader here, I think, on a more personal level (and I say that because I'm very sympathetic, and yet this has never happened to me. I only have a bro.) Well done, I must say. This is one of my favorites.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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