No One Lissens

they always wont me to talk

but no one wonts to lissen

they dont understand

they never will

they never could

they broke my trust

i have no were to go

no one to help me

all by myself

running from an unknown enemy

 

they say they will lissen

they say they understand

but did they?

no they couldnt

how could they

they didnt go through

they never had to face an unknown enemy

not one that is as dangeras as the one im running from

 

they all wont me to talk

but no one lissens

they all say they understand

but they dont

how could they?

Author's Note

srry if the spelling sucks

Reviews

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Great piece....it opens the reader to the writers mind...we get to see how you are feeling in this piece, because the emotion is so thick...Great Job!

[Barry S. Maltese]

interesting writing. it opens up a wondow to what is inside. nocely composed