Finnaly Here

i hear th planes over head

all i thnik is

think god thr finnaly here.

 

the bombs r going off

gun fire is all around

screams of pain fill th air

"Sarg!" i hear

i turn 2 c my lcp running tords me

"they have us surrounded!"

"S**t!"

 bomb goes off right by us

we dive tords th ground

hot shraptnal sprays everywere

 

th darkness falls over us

bombs still going off

gunfire still fills th air

with th screams of pain

back up wont come till morring

surrounded

no were to go

no were to hide

just pray to god we make it through th nite

pray to god we dont get over run

 

i hear th planes over head

all i can think is

thank god there finnaly here

 

Aileen Maltese 3/18/08

Author's Note

srry if th spelling sucks

Reviews

[Lexy]

I'll be very nice and NOT tell you about the numerous typos/spelling errors in this piece. Otherwise, very good job. I think you incorporated war very well in this piece.