Running

 

I’m running

I don’t know where

I’m just running

Running from something

I don’t know who or what.

I’m just running

I can’t stop

I look behind me

There’s nothing their

But my legs won’t stop

My hart feels like its going to explode!

My legs scream “Uncle!!!!!!!!”

But I can’t stop running

I feel it! It’s right behind me!

Then everything goes dark.

 

Black as night.

I can’t see.

But I feel at peace

A cool breeze sweeps over me

Everything stops.

I turn to face it.

I’m done running

I fight from here on out.

 

by Aileen Maltese 3/18/08

Reviews

[Lexy]

Hart spelt wrong, wrong "their" (there). Otherwise, very good. Nice use of "uncle". I used that every day when I fight with my bro.