Around Around

Around Around

A Poem by Aunre
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Walking round the village circle.

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I am here and I am not
But I walk in circles
With various thoughts
Of why my shoes touch
The sidewalk cracks
And why I should not
Look back too much

The small stone bridge
Beckons to my feet
It wants companionship
I think; but the crossing
To the sidewalk there
Is fraught with dangers
Waters beneath are tossing

Though the wall is sturdy
And tall, I dare not look
Lest I should fall but then
It would be no sorrow
For my kin have not the will
To bear me good or ill or
To wonder where I have been

© 2013 Aunre


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seriously? 92 views and one review. That's wrong. There is a resolution to this - a matter of fact-ness in the words - that there would be no sorrow in one's passing. No wonder. and the walker - also in a position of not looking back, not wondering.
Well penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aunre

10 Years Ago

Thank you, TL. I haven't jumped yet. It's not worth the effort and perhaps neither are they.



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seriously? 92 views and one review. That's wrong. There is a resolution to this - a matter of fact-ness in the words - that there would be no sorrow in one's passing. No wonder. and the walker - also in a position of not looking back, not wondering.
Well penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aunre

10 Years Ago

Thank you, TL. I haven't jumped yet. It's not worth the effort and perhaps neither are they.
I walked too through your poetic piece with joy. A splendid one...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aunre

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami. You are something of a wandering reader it seems, tripping over the occasional tur.. read more
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Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. I guess. You are welcome...:).........................

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