Inspection

Inspection

A Poem by Perhaps Maybe
"

mind ramblings

"

 

My body is melted

Against the fabric,

Into the cushions

Sit on me,

I am a couch.

 

Every particle,

Floating dust..

The wind,

Walk through me,

I am air.

 

My mind is jumbled

My head is clear

I am an empty shell,

Pick me up,

Turn me over.

© 2014 Perhaps Maybe


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I love it, I feel like a couch and like air. I just want one more line at the end...

Pick me up,
Turn me over,
Put me to your ear
and listen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 18, 2014
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Perhaps Maybe
Perhaps Maybe

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