Laughing with the madman

It's not when you're undefined

or when they come to you 

ill concerned or unreliable

disturbed by the presence in your truth 

A mind filled in its notion

tears away from the heart

It starts the same as with the madman 

when the rage in your weight force ascends

regardless of the matter

you find yourself amused

unstable without a doubt

 from point to pill

but still amused as if ignited

and the power around you swirls

You rapture into lighting 

which is where the 

laughter aimed

millions of minds ago

Author's Note

done

Reviews

[Shweta]

That's exactly what's laughing with the madmen be. Beautifully done, dear poet.

Need I say it's beautiful? Loved this piece. Feels so spot on.

It's better to hang about with those who don't feel perturbed by your truthfulness than those who gives a false sense of assurance.

[Perdition]

Hello there Stranger. HAPPY NEW YEAR!! Yes, I know..lol. Just finished writing a seventeen-page poem. Not too terrible actually but it needs some editing and feedback which I think you're just the woman for the job. It'll be ready for posting soon. The only issue about writing such poems is that you get absolutely no sleep at all and you are not even the slightest bit sorry ;) Sorry for the disappearance Shweta, I had mountain issues but thank you for all your kind words, and it's only a page long in reality so I might just send you the first draft to see if it is total bunk or perhaps sea worthy ....first an hours nap and then if I'm not mumbling I'll send it your way if you wish and then you can kindly puruse it if ya want., kind woman...How is the little one btw? You know where to answer the questions if you still have the info. Will be back to review if you've written anything...If not well then..THIRTY LASHES ;). Oh and By the by I thoroughly agree!! Much better to spend time with those who know your character and are mad as a hatter..lol. Give me someone who understands my mad hatted ways anyday and anytime 24/7 ;) Let me know about the one-pager and I should be done by tomorrow..anyway..Nap bound so see ya later come tommoroe...spanks!! ;)@!!!!!!

[Shweta]

EYEBALLS* well you know it

[Shweta]

That was a LoL btw in reply to your comment. A good humored one ofcourse :))

Be away as you might in the mountains. A seventeen pager huh? Look for someone else for that job Mr. Stranger. Meanwhile I will find the groove for another poem. :) btw while you were away I did scribble something. Post that one pager here and I am sure you will find amazing reviews on that one.

Good day!

[Perdition]

lol. The seventeen-pager was just a joke as well..and yes many miles from my home. What a wonderful time though spent up in the hills with Pops up in the mountains. Now I need a vacation from my vacation and no way would I ever subject you to reading or reviewing such a thing as one of my epic poems. I will toss it into the lot and see what happens after I get some sleep...only a one-page philosophy but it might just have an edge or maybe two inside of it ;).
Good Day! Not likely...gott find sleep wherever I may but something tells me I might just be up for another twenty-four hours or nore ;P Hugs and hey to the little one Shweta..q

[Shweta]

Hey to your Pops as well! Glad to know you had a wonderful time. Wishing you and him more of it.
read moreHey to your Pops as well! Glad to know you had a wonderful time. Wishing you and him more of it.

Come back and post another of your soon. Ofcourse whenever your muse relents! Till then..

Best of spirits to you :))

[Perdition]

I Thanks Poet… I will let him know of your kind wishes! And also post a picture of him soon, so you have an idea of what he looks like near 90. He has gotten older, 0 amazing that he still driving and running the tractor up on the mountain. To say that he is an and wonderful inspiration almost belittering to that man!

[Shweta]

Wonderful! Looking forward to that :))