Lonely one

Photography by Ali Shokri

I have known you

lonely one

minute from minute

right of my right

Hand against hand 

we’ve lived and died together

a million and one tries

And where the river bends 

I know what gleams you’ve claimed 

I have found you

in my forevers

Day by day, 

waiting for

eternity 

to strike

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

it's the purple lightning...gotta stand right beneath it ghostwriter.....

[Perdition]

What’s that old saying you can lead a horse to water but you can’t make her think… Lol. I didn’t see any new posts Grrrr, rumble rumble, fist, shaking high up in the air. Oh well, take your time it’ll come you just have to pick up the pen and start drinking… lol . Thanks?

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the language in the poetry. The photo was beautiful also. Maybe we must seek our river. Find our rightful place to be. You create images and thoughts in the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Perdition]

Find that river or stream that keeps its fatted trout with all the good universal plans under some shade of a restful eddy. Sounds good to me, and once more much appreciated Coyote. Strange how you go back just a couple of poems and discover how quickly you have moved on to the next, so much so that I really don't remember what the hell happened here. Perhaps some sleepless ghost hand deep into the works?

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is lovely, the words spoken with such grace and admiration. The imagery of,

"And where the river bends
I know what gleams you've claimed"

is just beautiful. This reads as soft as velvet.

Well penned.

[Perdition]

What a lovely review. Thank you for your kind words, Lisa Marie.

[Kelly Scheppers]

"I have found you in my forevers"...beautiful poetry, Joseph. How I wish you would write more like this.

[Perdition]

Well you know I'm going to try..thank you Kelly~