Bared

 Mountain stream

        serene 

  inviting 

            lush 

as her middle name

   always 

          unexpected 

                  when 

first announced 

               the tongue in branch 

 come winter

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, what a wonderful fall poem this is.

the tongue in branch, and then the bare trees, a winter breeze, chilling the soul.

[Perdition]

Wow! You went scrolling..Thanks Jay. Was saving and realized I hadn't yet published this one yet so I put on a fresh layer and coat of this and that and then gift wrapped it..thinking, who knows??..lol. Always a treat! Appreciated~