Alive

It was as if to be alive, to be in love. freed by imperfection; to be beside her, silently aware of our course and by this, the world as well as I...

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

without her there would be no world....

[Alisa Js]

❤️ I love this and don’t know how I missed it! Thank you for writing this! Just what I needed!

Sending you thoughts of eveverything amazing...

Always,

Alisa✨

[Tom]

Yes, to breathe in fresh air, feel the love and zest for life fill every pore is the essence of joy!

https://youtu.be/QuoKNZjr8_U

[Perdition]

Tis indeed Tom..tis indeed and thanks. I trust this is a link to something as well as uncommon as is
our collective connections. Thank you once more~

[Tom]

Yes my friend, uncommon but your poem has passion just like 'the mad' scientist in this link!

[Perdition]

Ha ha ha..Just linked and well, well put kind sir...
well put~

[Alfred Kukitz]

Flowing into the charity of awareness, the wording commingled with heart, soul & beauty.

Regards,
Al

[Perdition]

Poetic review indeed..."flowing into the charity" gotta love it. Thank you!! Happy Harvest Moon and Autumnal Eqiunox~

[emmajoy]

Alive indeed.. prepared to love and be loved as only imperfection allows..

[Perdition]

For you I'll give out a slight hint as to the code....the woman represents Gaia.."Alive indeed" Thank you once again~

[emmajoy]

That's quite a step away from what I thought.. must come back when my pre-conception (or whatever) has dulled..

[Perdition]

If you do it'll be exciting as hell to see what YOU see in between these lines, hahaha

[emmajoy]

Often warped mind and poor eysight!

[Perdition]

NEVER!!..except maybe those rare days that end in Y,

[emmajoy]

No comment, not even weeklY

[Perdition]

Not dailY? iI is what makes you that sweet unusual in the phenomenal sense.

[emmajoy]

And there was I listening to Damien Rice singing, It takes a lot to know a man

[Perdition]

Just coloring it in and making love to the sound of a guitar alone in the soft drops of your auditorium ..nothing wrong with wanting to bring down the last decade with an Outside in...Loving the Blower's Daughter.