Haunted

I saw you again last night

 hiding among the river stems

Your lips glowed a fashionable shy

Your dress

Weakened in the pale and pearl sweat of moonlight

I could never help but run to you

 

The fog of right and please rising between

I knew our distance would one day stagger

Fences there

  where once a field of we did play

 

Now my memory in torture drowns  

 

Your voice a melting star

And in the river

The last of all that ever was

Perfumes the air

Sweetly

for the rest

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Hello from across the very, very long way,

This one is absolutely impeccable in the way it serenades the song from within to remember...bittersweet memories handled with elegance and style, with a delicate emotional brush.

At least, that is what this one spoke to me about.

Wishing you a most productive weekend.

Alisa💫

[Perdition]

WHy thank you far and across the way.

[Alisa Js]

You are most welcome, my poetic friend extraordinaire!

Alisa💫

[Brittany Zedalis]

I literally cannot pick a favorite line from this..it is all so absolutely amazing to me...or maybe captivating? That would perhaps be a better word. ^-^

[Perdition]

Well I can't read this one without dying so STOP IT!..lol..Thanks. There was a moment there when I desperately had to disappear into the walls to write this one through. Not sure i'm back yet but that's okay..Walls are warm for now :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

well, I can probably relate. I'm stuck in limbo between a return and remaining afar.

[Perdition]

Don't get stuck..I'm where I want to be but believe me I'll be up and out of the walls in time for the sunrise. It's a great time for growth…the wisteria are in bloom..GO and say thanks…They'll tell you what to do.