Whispering to the Moon Risen Crocus

A remake from another time

Sleep well my gentle iris

The sun is yet still harboring 

In its southern nest

Our dreams whispering for your ascendance

Though slumbering with the eyes that see not this slow intent

Walk gently 

Let the dew of morn, as it so often will,

Dust your passioned climb atop this ‘guise

And crown your beauty indelible 

In time this favor will be our burden well returned 
And with it
Our light improved
Whispering to the moon risen crocus

Whispering for your first hints of sunlight
Ashen of moon in the last fires of smoke 
Glowering in winter reverie
My hands shivering less from less upon the blade 
Burdened solely by the heart and thought
Wandering along the milky spring
Renewed alone by the sight of you
A smoldering wisp and 
The ember Nag Champa

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

Oh, how I'm glad I ventured back into your archives and found this one as well. I keep re-reading it, and get caught on each line, just astonished at how wonderful each one is. Sigh. I really, really loved this.

[Perdition]

Available both on paperback and coming to a movie theater near your neighborhood soon! Thanks L-C…I'm still working on the Berries rewrite and a billion others as well. Now to find me that photographer and visual artist by Sunday…I'm thinking of just screaming out my front door. I mean, why not???

[Brittany Zedalis]

Seeing you scream out your front door for a photographer and visual artist would be quite the sight. Likely ineffective, but hilarious all the same.

[Perdition]

You are way SOOOO negative. I happen to have an in with the …yeah you're probably right. Still gonna do it though cause ya can't keep a mad man down1

[Brittany Zedalis]

I wish I could see that. That would be funny enough to keep me laughing for weeks. xD

[Perdition]

Wish I could but damn that court order! Can't even wear the gorilla costume while yelling for the artists. Now I ask Is it me or what???

[Brittany Zedalis]

Hahahahaha You in a gorilla costume? I would have seen it all.

[Perdition]

Well it goes to show that you don't know me very well now do you? There is still the matter of the Wizard of Oz's Cowardly Lion costume and let's not be so quick to write-off Dorothy's costume as well.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Of course I don't know you very well, yet lol And oh my goodness. Dorothy's? Hahahahaha

[Perdition]

HEY!! Dorothy was a quality gal…killed a witch and took on the wizard thank you very much~

[Brittany Zedalis]

Yes, yes, I know. I was very into Wizard of Oz when I was younger. ^-^ She was a bit naive, but pretty badass all the same.

[Perdition]

Then we are agreed…A badass way to get a good photographer and/or visual artist is by yelling out of your front door while dressed in a Dorothy rig. Thank you very much kindly~BTW…What the hell is wrong with you?

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm just a little insane, no big deal or anything. xD

[Priscilla Sayers]

Such eloquent lyrical wisdom sprouts from my sweet Hawk. A lullaby to the insomniac. Much love my beautiful friend.😘

[Perdition]

Now do you really believe that that kinda talk helps?? But Thanks..You are the kindest of true friends and I would not let anyone question that. Not for all the rice in the morning bowl of Krispies..Great..And now I want Rice Krispies!!