160 Degrees

160 Degrees

A Poem by Perdition
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If I could strike up one track of lines running long -

I would craft me a little staleness of mind…an adobe-less walls where “Nothing” could grow its wilderness.

Where flaws could float down in color their beautiful doors of my collected uncertainty.

I would raise the mangled mounds of mesh and metal fangs to meet me at the gate then dive, like a parentless child into its infinite maw.

I would rip out the rump over our masses.

Burn in Moses like a fire of want, if I had but a simple crawl.

Root past my yaw, strapping on to a drifting branch of young lunged primal audience.

No towns lingering in the outturns of approval or the black bagged vials of identity,.

No termite souls whaling under the crowned green baron nets; only rabid screams of the river, passing by in a bank-blue human condition.

I would build a time to a raft out of melting straw and ‘twine my limbs with acidic vines to hold high my fears. Grow dahlias from the waters of my eyes and grind a mighty rain from the leaves under the belly of the hippo city; my fingers slipping under water, waving like blades of wheat to our circling degrees.

Five, last time I wrecked.

 

© 2014 Perdition


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:: i aspire for such a loss of identity... but then i also think that an identity is a non-existent entity in the larger scheme of things...

:: very thought-provoking work...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Perdition

10 Years Ago

Plus it blocks traffic :)) Thanks. Well, .don't go thinking too hard...it may mean the greatest not.. read more
.

10 Years Ago

:: hahahaha... plus thank you for the precious advice... :P p.s. so far the thinking is going well.... read more
Hello from across land and sea,

Oh! to peel back the veil and visit again inside the space of memories divine... to run and laugh, wrapped in the innocence of an unborn child.

Taste again the purity and swim in the unpolluted seas...

How amazing that would be!

Needless to say, I loved this one.

Stay warm, you!

alisa ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alisa Js

10 Years Ago

;-0 let me ponder that for a bit... I shall return!

Thanks again, you!

;-.. read more
Perdition

10 Years Ago

Okay but our "rational" depends upon it so ponder with reason :P Consider the audience and use your .. read more
Alisa Js

10 Years Ago

Golden words from a golden soul, star shining from the sun. You never cease to amaze.

.. read more

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