Time to say goodbye

It's time for me to say goodbye
To my mommy, please don't cry
As I lay on this hospital bed.
There's nothing we can do, they said
The feeling of bullets piercing my heart.
The feeling of knowing we would be apart
As my small body hit the floor
I knew that my life was no more
In heaven I rest
It's for the best
To my mommy, please don't cry
It's time for me to say goodbye

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. I loved it.

[Bright Ocean Star]

very good and very touching. Nice write, Owlgirl22!

[Frieda P]

Not exactly sure what this one is about, but it tugs at the heartstrings nonetheless.

[ღCloveღ]

It's a girls last thoughts as she dies from a gunshot wound

[Frieda P]

Wasn't sure if the bullets piercing her heart were metaphorical or not.

[ღCloveღ]

I don't know. This flowed from my heart not my head

[Frieda P]

Either way it works............

[ღCloveღ]

Thanks Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

You're welcome, my pleasure :-)