Flame

Flickering, dancing
It houses the heat
For which the soul yearns
Boiling and deep
Miniature stars spark up
Ten thousand feet
While cackling lulls
The mind to sleep.

Reviews

[Stifle]

I'm sure anybody could read this and extract their own meaning from it. It's colorful, sweet, and subjective enough to be impactful on a broad scale. Very good work. Thank you for sharing!

[Sami Khalil]

You writes are short but packed with meanings...:)