No Clothes

No Clothes

A Poem by Mr. Deft Diction
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"No Clothes On"...a track by R&B youngin' Trey Songz. He got me to thinking early this morning. And it's just one of those days, LMAO!

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Got me thinking like Trey Songz, girl....

I'm picturing you with no clothes on.

I'm just try'na get my grown folk on.

Get you open right quick,

let your mind get gone.

The groove threw you off;

but I'm here to help you get back on.

Toss out the hula hoops,

let's just do it all night long.

Stripping down to your thigh-highs,

six- inch heels and lace thong.

I got 17 tracks....

we can do it all the way thru the last song.

I know you're thrown off,

I'm coming at you all hard;

but I do this like it's my job....

I just want you to get your rocks off.

That insatiable feeling is what happens

when you start to reach that liquid ceiling,

enough to make you pop your top off.

You know it's a spiritual event....

you whispered my name,

then said GOD.

I'm just here to help you stand again,

when it's all over and you've lost strength in your quads.

While you're over there, tenderly biting your bottom lip,

all you gotta do is give me the nod.

And it's on.

Got me thinking like Trey Songz,

I'm picturing you with no clothes on.

 

© 2008 Mr. Deft Diction


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I really enjoy the creativity in your work, Michael. When I read something, I don't want it to be typical. Your work is certainly unique, particularly the imagery is this one. I can envision her...ready to 'do it all night long'... Insatiable and sexy... removing her thong...beautiful thighs...biting her bottom lip... Wanting... needing to experience that 'spiritual event'... A delicious piece...pardon the pun...
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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ok number 4 on the album
But I play number 6 on album
It's the best played all day
"Day" yea but it ends with
"We should be"
That is more spiritual


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

was this yours, or a song by someone else? trey songz is great! esp when he sings duet with mariah carey "ill be there" on her unplugged album. One word: phenomenal

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha i know exactly what you mean ^.^ i like this.

-s.e.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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