No Clothes

"No Clothes On"...a track by R&B youngin' Trey Songz. He got me to thinking early this morning. And it's just one of those days, LMAO!

Got me thinking like Trey Songz, girl....

I'm picturing you with no clothes on.

I'm just try'na get my grown folk on.

Get you open right quick,

let your mind get gone.

The groove threw you off;

but I'm here to help you get back on.

Toss out the hula hoops,

let's just do it all night long.

Stripping down to your thigh-highs,

six- inch heels and lace thong.

I got 17 tracks....

we can do it all the way thru the last song.

I know you're thrown off,

I'm coming at you all hard;

but I do this like it's my job....

I just want you to get your rocks off.

That insatiable feeling is what happens

when you start to reach that liquid ceiling,

enough to make you pop your top off.

You know it's a spiritual event....

you whispered my name,

then said GOD.

I'm just here to help you stand again,

when it's all over and you've lost strength in your quads.

While you're over there, tenderly biting your bottom lip,

all you gotta do is give me the nod.

And it's on.

Got me thinking like Trey Songz,

I'm picturing you with no clothes on.

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

I really enjoy the creativity in your work, Michael. When I read something, I don't want it to be typical. Your work is certainly unique, particularly the imagery is this one. I can envision her...ready to 'do it all night long'... Insatiable and sexy... removing her thong...beautiful thighs...biting her bottom lip... Wanting... needing to experience that 'spiritual event'... A delicious piece...pardon the pun...
X

[Ivory]

wow this was a very hot and sexy piece..
Loved the flow and rhyme... and i love that song too ; )

[Caramel Gold]

let's just do it all night long.

Stripping down to your thigh-highs,

six- inch heels and lace thong.

I got 17 tracks....

we can do it all the way thru the last song.

~Love that part... this is so hot!!!

[closed account]

six inch heels??? WOW!!!! and 17 tracks??? now thats a night for you... I can see this poem as a rap as well, nicely written.

[badgirl beth]

Bravo!! great imagery that's a given!!!!

[Amber Victoria Tudor]

"That insatiable feeling is what happens

when you start to reach that liquid ceiling,

enough to make you pop your top off."

Oooh so nice.
Very smooth and seductive, and enjoyed.
Thank you

[Angel's Lady]

That insatiable feeling is what happens
when you start to reach that liquid ceiling,

I love this line! This is a very cool tribute to the one you love about making love with her! Very nice job! Excellent piece of writing and very sensually wrote, too! It's going in my Favorites for sure!

[Jadarae]

Woo Lawd!
Niiiicccceeee! :-)

[J. Hampton]

Nice li' rhyme scheme and...
I always appreciate your wordplay

" liquid cieling " ..... a cop-able ...mos definitely

YOU...are wayyyyy past anything Youngin can pen

Blessssssssssss

[An Ordinary Woman]

You know it's a spiritual event....

you whispered my name,

then said GOD. ... Well written and sexy as all get out. "Liquid ceiling," wow you've nailed it perfectly. No pun intended. :+) ... "liquid ceiling" thats soooo perfect. Wow, excellent writing!