Full Cupboard

Yo, maybe it's just because I'm hungry at this very moment. I don't know.

 

 

I bet your neck tastes like cantaloupe,

your earlobes like grapes...

and I can be like Tarzan, Jane....

holding on to you while we swing from the drapes.

Every event has its time;

Every time its place;

It’s just that I need this right now,

There isn’t a moment to waste.

Caressing you slow,

Supplanting the past,

Mes mains sur votre taille.

Customer service just right,

I have no other business today.

 

I bet your juices taste like

Being refreshed in the fountain of youth.

Having been inside of Eden for four hours now,

I’m living proof—

Harder than life itself.

 

I bet your lips taste like cherry cheesecake.

Licking my fingers after touching you,

There’s not just dessert I see in your shape.

All-you-can eat and your toes are houer-d’ouvres ,

With succulent breasts on my plate.

Even the garnish will be devoured,

At a rate of one course per hour.

I feel the urge to savor this dish,

Lightly dipped in flour,

My taste buds recognize Saffron flowers

As I flip you and your buns rise….

 

I bet all of you tastes like….

Mmmm.

Author's Note

Mes mains sur votre taille= "my hands on your waist"

Reviews

[oneZtwoLLs]

MMMmmm. Your words are seduction! What a colorful write! You've left me breathless. Your woman must be special.

One comment: The entire poem has a heavenly flow, but this stanza causes the reader to stumble:

Mes mains sur votre taille.
Customer service just right,

Leaving English and transversing to a beautiful language sounds right, but returning to English with "customer service" botches the flow. Perhaps something more subtle or poingant would be more appropriate in its stead.

All nitpicking aside, this poem is going to my favorites. It is so sentual!

[she makes me weird]

I love how the title of the piece leads me in a totally different direction until I start to read...great write and wonderful imagery.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

This is nice, unique, bec you compare women to a "full cupboard." i like the part, "dip you in flour" it is so visual, and made me laugh, bec i envision this women being rolled in flour. kinky! do they have that stuff?

[An Ordinary Woman]

Yo, maybe it's just because I'm hungry at this very moment. I don't know.

Now see, this is what I was talkin bout. I love the way you do this and I have some catching up to do, lots really. But the phrase that come to mind is "putty in yer hand." That is sad but so true, your a delight to read.

[J. Hampton]

Mmmm..

In a ....word

Gourmet

You have mastered the art of true sensuality in writing
suggestion is the game...and the rating stays the same...

Downright..." TASTEful " ...pardon the pun

Blessssssssssss

Jen

[Sexy Jones]

I must let my fiance read this.
You've combined two things he loves:
food and sex.
Great job.
Love this piece.

[BuStY B***H]

this is hott...

u deff compared somethin i wouldnt think of but it deff worked.....


its beast 4realz...

-BB

[TamiViolet]

Damn Michael. You really are hungry... Now so am I. You are hot for some woman..
indeed. Bringing the toes into this piece is exceptional as 'toes' are highly erotic and
sensual... And 'the fountain of youth'...love and lust have a way of bringing us to life...
highly invigorating... I feel so much energy as I read this piece...and the conclusion?
Well, just one phrase...'Mmmm'...

[Choosing Life]

Go Sit Down....

I cant even review this appropriately for giggling.

Do you always got to show out?

Your pen spits yet again...