Orchids

3rd Poem so far. Little happier with this one than the second.

Hysteria saturates my perception, blooming forth into
Orchids of Disorder.
Nostalgia pricks the mental surface tension, mobilized
shock troops unwavering.
Ballpoint accuracy steadies my aim, pinpointing on your
mind's eye masquerade.
Pupils dilated, catatonic, jaded from the mundane
bloodshot with envy.
A sonic sanctuary, is the aegis, implosive resonations
through my looking glass.
Heads down, curtains drawn, redemption is now almost
unattainable.
Scarlet veils my discontent, perfection within
deceitful ideals.
Conceptual welding buckles, a merciless pursuit,
pressurizing.
Adrenaline fuels my overdrive, clocking in at
metaphysical supernova.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! I really liked it! The details and descriptions were perfect and absolutely amazing! Totally awesome poem! Fantastic job! :D

[Fabian G. Franklin]

great word usage and descriptive qualities and a cool vibe to it as well...big thumbs up on this one

[Rachel DeHart]

Again.
You amaze me.
I love
"Pupils dilated, catatonic, jaded from the mundane
bloodshot with envy."
and
"Heads down, curtains drawn, redemption is now almost
unattainable.
Scarlet veils my discontent, perfection within
deceitful ideals."

Like, you have no idea. You make me want to write better.
:p