For Aamir Ali,

For Aamir Ali,

A Poem by Cafeland Khamoshiyan

I created a fan page,
you got 102 followers.

I made a sketch of yours,
you didn't like it.

I tweeted you for like hundred times,
Do you know that someone wants a retweet. 

© 2015 Cafeland Khamoshiyan


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Just an idea--What if you reformatted like this:

I created a fan page,
you got 102 followers.

I made a sketch of yours,
you didn’t like it.

I tweeted you for like hundred times,
Do you know that someone wants a retweet.

I think it creates a more visual effect of how you put yourself out there as a fan, and then highlights how he has ignored you

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cafeland Khamoshiyan

9 Years Ago

Done and thank you..
It made me smile!!
Well done!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cafeland Khamoshiyan

9 Years Ago

I wish aamir ali reads it too..
thnks..

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Added on July 10, 2015
Last Updated on July 11, 2015
Tags: love, fan