I'd trust you, if only-

I'd trust you with my life,
If you didn't hold a knife,
To my back,

I'd give you my love,
If you didn't take it,
And leave,

I'd give you my word,
If you didn't throw it back,
At me,

I'd give you my heart,
But it's already broken,

Because,

Before you,

Someone,

Already killed me.

Reviews

[Larry John]

"I'd give you my word,
If you didn't throw it back,
At me"
These lines hit me the hardest. Once again you've written something beautiful, dear. Each letter has been strung together by patient hands to form very powerful words. You've crafted a very deep and emotional piece. Hephaestus would be proud

[PenguinEmpiress]

OMG thank you! And Hephaestus, omg 😂😂

[MightyMouse]

This is beautiful. You are very talented.

[PenguinEmpiress]

Thank you :3 very much!

[Stardust]

Simple but deep. great job!

[PenguinEmpiress]

Thank you!