Foxy lady

Foxy eyes,

Heavenly body,

Lady,

I approach you,

You’re so far away

Already.

 

I’d go

To the gym,

Only for you

To look at me.

 

I’d hit

All the

Nightclubs

For you

To notice me.

 

I’d stop

Drinking

Just for you

To

Believe in me.

 

Foxy eyes,

Heavenly body,

Lady,

I Approach you,

You’re so far away

Already.

 

I’d take

Dance classes

For the

Sake of

Impressing you.

 

I’d start

Cracking

Silly jokes

To see

Your smile.

 

I’d stop

Beating up

My neighbors

For you

To like me.

 

 

Foxy eyes,

Heavenly body,

Lady,

I approach you,

You’re running

Away from me.

 

I’d stop

Going to the casino,

To save money,

For you, for me,

For us.

 

I’d stop

Meeting up

With the gang,

For you

To approach me.

 

I would

Hold on

To my Gun license,

To keep you

To me.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I forgot to mention... I'm a big Jimi Hendrix fan as well. Did I mention that and forgot that I mentioned it? J

[Pennywriter]

Good catch. I discovered a musical gem. Thank you!

[Ken Simm.]

Did all that still didn't work. She takes a lot of work does this lady. Excellent.

[Poetic Beauty]

Giving up gambling and beating up neighbors lmao I hope you are really beating up your neighbors unless of course they are starting it, I love the slight humor in this poem and the length as which the narrator would go to meet this lady

[Davidgeo]

Are you really gambling and beating up your neighbors on regular?

That's kinda hilarious how you slipped that in there.

[Pennywriter]

Only in my gangster dreams...

[Davidgeo]

True dat homie

[Chris Shaw]

That Foxy lady sure has someone smitten. Seems you are prepared to give up an awful lot to get her attention. And then your final stanza and I thought, oh no. Run Foxy Lady. Anyone with a licence for a gun to use to make sure she stays is someone I would run a mile from :)) Entertaining read Pennywriter.

Chris

[Pennywriter]

Thank you for the read. I was inspired by gangster films such as "Goodfellas" and "Casino": very entertaining films.