Break Me

If he's happy, I'm happy, even if I'm really not.

I don’t care if I hurt.
As long as you wear a smile.
If I break a thousand times.
You can make it worth the while.
Take the shattered pieces,
And paint a work of art,
I’ll be fine eventually,
That ink comes from the heart.

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Courtney Shaddock

Author's Note

It's kind of short, and I think it might need more. I'm not sure though, I just wrote it right now and I kind of have writers block. What do you think?

Reviews

[melissa]

short and sweet:)

[bre]

what do i think? well thank you for asking lol. i think that this little poem says a lot it's short and sweet, right to the point. i like poems like this. they are hard to come by because writers like to write a lot...it's what we do lol. it's hard to get all your thoughts down into just a few short lines but you have managed to do so, and that makes this poem amazing i think you should leave it as it is.

peace of bre=]