The chapter is which we are unable to express those words is a burden... but once you do say them you take on a whole new chapter that's even harder than not saying them at all... You weave 10 lines... and do them without thought... just as those 3 words are done...
Ah yes Aram - those three words I guessed could only be I L Y. Why are they so hard to say? I guess fear of rejection or/and feelings of inadequacy. The object of our affection is glorified until she becomes more than human, a goddess. But she, like me, is human too, with all the imperfections we all have.
Get to know each other first and save the I love you's for later!
All the best,
Alan
And you don’t disappoint, so different to the last I read, but still I hear you, that was me, for so long its embarrassing, just recently I've realised that the stars, whispers and words just don’t care, speak to the hart, even of rejected, the she will hear… it is not as hard and the not knowing (trust me;)
Awwww, sometimes those are the three hardest words to say. The depth at which we feel and the painful knowledge that we cannot find the ways to communicate these emotions can be heart wrenching. I love this.
*one side note**
(not sure if you meant I've whispered it, or I'll whisper it...)
"I'll write it in a thousand ways
And feel it in a million more"-----my favorite lines, I can relate on so many levels....
Very touching piece:)
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10 Years Ago
Miss April, your praise -as always- far outshines that which is praises.
And thank you .. read moreMiss April, your praise -as always- far outshines that which is praises.
And thank you for spotting that mistake; no idea how that slippery b*****d got by me, but I definitely value your keen eye as much as I appreciate your reviews.
I'll be sure to do myself the pleasure of reading more of you soon. ;)
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You're very welcome. As always, with your work, it is my pleasure:)
The chapter is which we are unable to express those words is a burden... but once you do say them you take on a whole new chapter that's even harder than not saying them at all... You weave 10 lines... and do them without thought... just as those 3 words are done...
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