Tether

Tether

A Poem by Pen Draggin'

I have entered another idea of existence;
a different dimension,
and your voice is my only tether to reality.
Submerged in the gentle caress of flesh
I'm feeling the weightlessness of your kiss
and I'm flighty. You're losing me
as I slip up and higher
past bliss
into some entirely unknown plane
of immeasurable content.
Then that's when you utter a few
simple syllables, tugging at the cotton string
tied to my inflation
and are assured that I'm still looped around your wrist.

© 2010 Pen Draggin'


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I love how your poetry evokes an ethereal quality, bringing emotions out of the box and into another realm of mental existance.

Fantastic Piece!

Wolfie

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was one of those poems which Iread and honestly said I will read no more today, so as not to forget the magic of that one. Excellent!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sooo mesmerizing, every one of your writes feels like an education to me. From beginning to end, this was timeless beauty, and I loved it!! Those last four lines, in particular, will stay with me for a long time. Brilliant!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Tugging at a cotton string connected to you...wonderful imagery my dear. Weightlessness has been a regular feeling for me lately, and I suspect it has for you as well. You've captured that feeling beautifully. I know it's a comfortable place to be. Very comfortable. You're vastly talented, love.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Pen Draggin'
Pen Draggin'

Portland, OR



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Hi! I'm Kelsey, I'm 22 years old with a passion for poetry. I write because it is innate and, quite simply, I'm pretty f*****g good at it. I love the rain. I will always belong to the Northwest. I sa.. more..

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