Super Nova

A Poem by Pen Draggin'

come together fast
burst
expel vast energy
implode
cave in on me
let the heat
10,000 suns
melt us
chemistry
combustion
settle back
fireworks on my face
ions
expand
among nothingness
every color
exposed
glaring shards of light
love like
a fallen star

© 2009 Pen Draggin'

Author's Note

Another early one.

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Kathryn

To say so much with so few words is a testament to your talent. Your word choice is the strongest part of this work. Very well-chosen words with a zesty kick. Great place to set the bar for yourself. I can't wait to read more recent words and see growth.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Leap

So intense. Once again so good for being old. I didn't write this well a few years ago. The format of short one line description works well with the emotion. There's a lot of emotion. Miss you dear.

Posted 15 Years Ago

M for Magicant

slick ending. i'm jealous.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 28, 2009
Last Updated on August 28, 2009

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Pen Draggin'

Portland, OR

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Hi! I'm Kelsey, I'm 22 years old with a passion for poetry. I write because it is innate and, quite simply, I'm pretty f*****g good at it. I love the rain. I will always belong to the Northwest. I sa.. more..